ricebird: (Should I go sweet or savory?)
Kotori Iida ([personal profile] ricebird) wrote in [community profile] realmofstories 2018-12-08 07:00 am (UTC)

A few days... and I don't blame you, those fish are fierce. Not to mention too skinny to eat...

But... in the story, the mermaid's only allowed on land for three days, and then she's supposed to... [get turned into a sea worm monster in possession of a witch... MAYBE GLOSS OVER THAT PART.] I-I mean... maybe your voice and legs are doing this because you need to go back to water?
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