oligomania: (I don't think they would accept me)
Velvet Crowe ([personal profile] oligomania) wrote in [community profile] realmofstories 2019-07-25 12:11 am (UTC)

[ Velvet waits while Naomi considers the possibilities of a new arrangement, then is silent as the Sea Witch speaks of new terms. ]

So if the mermaid fails, she won't turn into seafoam but will return to the sea. Giving up her family forever yet remaining alive. Helping you brew potions as her new life.

[ It removes the part about the mermaid dying simply because a prince doesn't love her in return. Means giving up not just one love but two - yet all remaining alive. There are ways around not "returning" to the family. ]

And should she succeed in gaining his love? Will she regain her voice, will the pain end, will she be able to see her family?

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